Chick I'm drawing!

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Bunny

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Fullsized!

So. What do you think? I've got a little tweaking then I'm going to colour her in a few different techniques :D.

 

 

jedimarri

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The angle of the arms looks a little ... off. Not sure how to describe it other than that :(

 

Bunny

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Well, I shamelessly traced her:



I'm trying to work on my shading technique so I wanted something a little faster so I could do shading lol. Normally I draw from scratch!

 

jedimarri

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Then I'm amazed at the angle of her arms in real life :P Actually, looking at it again it makes more sense. For some reason I was convinced the arms had to be crossed for the arms to be in that position...

Yah...can you say....dyslexic?

 

Bunny

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She MUST have REALLY small boobs cause I can't do it. Not without hurting myself LOL.

 

jedimarri

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I can sorta do it, but not easily! I like the small boobs theory. Another theory - photo shop?

 

Bunny

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Nah I can definitely do it, I just have to lean forward and squish my womanly bits.

 

Triss

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You should consider redrawing this. I like the pose but the girl's arms look a bit deformed.

 

SifuPhil

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If you sit at a computer desk like I'm doing, rest your elbows on it and try to replicate this pose it's quite easy. Not that I have man-boobs to get in the way - well, not very large ones, anyway - but it's not as unnatural as we might think. 

Bunny, maybe if you got that wee little bit of her left bicep in there it might help show it's HER arms, rather than two needy midgets trying to climb her cleavage. You've already got it on her right side and I think it really helps ...

 

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Triss (05:36am Sun, Nov 11, 2012)
You should consider redrawing this. I like the pose but the girl's arms look a bit deformed.
I agree. They do look quite deformed but adding those arm marks onto her hands will make it less deformed. Also, when your done, adding color to tone out the picture is a great idea.

 

Bunny

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I would love to colour her in for sure! :D

 

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Jade Elizabeth is an eccentric young woman who enjoys writing stories and poems with hidden deeper meanings. She is quoted saying “Writing to me is not a hobby. It's a passion. It's something that lets my thoughts expose themselves, and my heart shine through where other art could not.”

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