Hangover Sunday

Plastic

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02:18pm Wed, Sep 18, 2013

Hangover Sunday
a Poemsong by Nick Schell

Its the dry heaving,
not eating, heavy breathing
Sick of being
too thirsty, I'm never drinking
AGAIN.

Hangover sunday,
is the one day, that's not fun, ney
It is some say,
the worst day of the week.

It's a time to neglect the regret
and forget what I didn't expect
to ever happen, but it did,
and now I’m FUCKED

Hangover Sunday,
is that one day, you not dare say
about some lay,
you wish didn't happen last night

Hangover Sunday,
is the one day, that some say
can be a fun way
to know what death feels like

igorrsobral

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Ahahahahah can't even explain how much I loved/laughed with this!

wylder chase

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Nice Rhymes! For one who has been there and knows a sunday hangover blows. This poem reminds me of the song "Sunday Morning Coming Down", by kris kristofferson I believe--give it a listen if you haven't heard it before. I could here these words riding on a two beat, a little stand up bass, and some G,C,D and then the next thing you know heads are bobbing, chaos ensues, and you will get saturday screws by the twos.

Sofieb529

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still laughing! Really enjoyed this! Keep Writing!

jackofroses

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I like that, it was clever! I can also sympathize with the lyrics because waking up for work with a hangover every Sunday is horrible.

anya1096

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hahaha!! i can relate to this so much! yes, Sunday is the famous day for hangovers! i cant tell you how much i just laughed at your post! great job

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Nic Schelll (Plastic) is a Poet who has made 311 posts since joining Creative Burrow on 11:12pm Wed, Sep 8, 2010. Plastic was invited by no one.

About Plastic
Hello! My name is Nic, and I write words and things that rhyme sometimes... just like that! :3

I'm inspired by basically anything and everything. Legends, folklore, and mythology, personal experiences, and things-that-could-be-a-children's-poem-turned-macabre are a few of things I like to write about the most.
On the other side of my writing spectrum, is my love of movies. I wish to be a screenwriter some day, so... movies are pretty important to me.

I have an extremely healthy obsession with the four elements (Earth, Air, Water, and Fire), and Tegan and Sara.
Thank you for reading my words, it really means the world!

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