The never ending EROTIC COMEDY

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Bunny

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How this will help: It can help get creative juices flowing, and maybe even give you ideas for stories or plots!

We're making an erotic comedy story one sentence at a time! Why erotic comedy and not just erotic? Because at some point it's going to get hysterical, or really gross. We're hoping for the former!

Be sure to read the whole story before you contribute so you know what's happening, and please allow other people to post before you post again. At least one other person needs to post after you before you can contribute again unless there has been no reply for 5 days.

PLEASE USE CORRECT PUNCTUATION AND CAPITALISATION LIKE IT WAS A REAL STORY! ONE SENTENCE AT A TIME!

Other Stories to participate in:
The never ending story
The never ending HORROR story
The never ending LOVE story

 

 

Djeinus

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Once upon a time, or maybe twice, there was a pizza boy.

 

Bunny

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He was average in the looks department, and below average when it came to intellect.

 

Djeinus

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One night, he was taking an order to a suburban home.

 

Djeinus

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Shamepost doubleful, i.e. more than five days.
 
He arrived at the place and rang what he thought was the door bell.

 

Bunny

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Inside there was giggling and music could be heard from an upstairs bedroom.

 

Kimberley

Furry Young Bunny

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Pressing the button again he noticed a little sign with "broken, please knock" scrawled on it, and sighed, knocking loudly on the door.

 

Bunny

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The commotion upstairs quietened for a second as giggling girls found their way to the windows and peep hole in the door.

 

Bunny

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Muffled giggling could be heard as the door was fought over until finally Dirk was blinded by the light that burst outside from the door.

 

Djeinus

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The light revealed four exceptionally beautiful women, loosely clothed in extra tight bathrobes.

 

SifuPhil

LITTLE BUNNY FOO-FOO

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Dirk's Extra-Large Special began to feel full and heavy, the steam issuing forth from its tight confines, as did the pizza.

 

A.P.W.

Newborn Baby Bunny

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Dirk grew more and more hungry, not for a pizza, but for his throbbing vein threaded manhood with the purple hat to be dancing with the tightly, loosely clothed women, in a western style fashion, yee haa.

 

Djeinus

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The fair residents of the house noticed his little situation and started to giggle at the sight.

 

SifuPhil

LITTLE BUNNY FOO-FOO

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A thick, ropey strand of steaming white cheese slowly made its way to the floor, finally hitting it with a nasty, wet THWIP ...

 

Bunny

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"That pizza better be hot, or it's free and you'll have to earn your pay in another way" one of the girls giggled suggestively.

 

Djeinus

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"Oh, I know more than the pizza that's hot" he replied smugly.

 

SifuPhil

LITTLE BUNNY FOO-FOO

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*background soundtrack volume increase*

Bow-Chicka-BOW-WOW

 

Kimberley

Furry Young Bunny

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One of the girls grabbed the pizza while the others grabbed Dirk by his sleeves and pulled him into the house, "we better get you some money to pay for this" one of the girls giggled.

 

QuirkyJessi

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Dirk couldn't believe his luck and was a little frightened by their enthusiasm (not to mention the strange background porno music that seemed to start playing out of nowhere)!

 

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Jade Elizabeth (Bunny) is a Poet who has made 6253 posts since joining Creative Burrow on 12:15am Sun, Nov 2, 2008. Bunny was invited by No one (creator of this site).

About Bunny
Jade Elizabeth is an eccentric young woman who enjoys writing stories and poems with hidden deeper meanings. She is quoted saying “Writing to me is not a hobby. It's a passion. It's something that lets my thoughts expose themselves, and my heart shine through where other art could not.”

Commonly her poems are inspired by love or depression, and are dedicated to the people who encouraged the emotion. Given the chance she will readily pull her poems apart, exposing the deeper and hidden meanings behind her words.

Her stories are usually unspoken messages to those close to her – giving every story a hidden meaning. Some things are better left unsaid, or in her case, expressed indirectly through stories.

Jade used to write Documentation for Simple Machines in her free time, but has since begun studying and working, which takes up most of her free time now.

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Romance, Fantasy, and Sad Stories and Poems.

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