I was struck down by inspiration and I wanted to write a poem but I just couldnt...so I wrote this song.

I'm really not sure on structure and things, and this is my first attempt, so while I'd like some feedback keep in mind that I have no idea what I'm doing . I probably even mislabeled parts.

It's supposed to be sung like Green Day would I suppose (but Enrique at the beginning), but sort of have slow down moments there too where you sing softer/slower. I didnt know how to describe it and I can't sing it so yeah.



VERSE
Ever get that feeling you know something's wrong,
But you don't have a clue what it is?
Ever get that feeling you no longer belong,
But you don't really know what caused it?

[get louder/Green Dayish after and including "growing between us"]

VERSE
How do good friends drift, further away?
Why can't we fix this rift, growing between us?
I just wanna be your friend, but I know I've fucked up.
I just wanna make amends, but I don't know how to fix it.

CHORUS
But please please,
let me call your number
Please please,
Let me come over
Please please
I JUST WANNA BE YOUR FRIEND!

VERSE
I just wanna be your friend, I know I've fucked up.
I just want to make amends, but I don't know how to fix it.
I just wanna be your friend, fill this rift between us.
I just want to make amends, forget what ever caused it.

[Music slow down like Enrique again till the caps part]

CHORUS
So Please please,
let me call your number
Please please,
Let me come over
Please please
I JUST WANNA BE YOUR FRIEND!

BRIDGE
AS IF NOTHING'S CHANGED!
I JUST WANT TO BE YOUR FRIEND!
I know that I'm to blame...

Ever get that feeling, you did something wrong?
Ever get that feeling, you just don't belong?
Ever get that feeling, there's a giant rift between us?

[increase speed a tiny bit]

CHORUS
Please please,
let me call your number!
Please please,
Let me come over!
Please please
I JUST WANNA BE YOUR FRIEND!

VERSE
Please please,
Let me be your friend!
Please please,
I know that I've fucked up!
Please please,
I just want to make amends!
Please please,
I don't know how to fix this!
Please please,
Fill this rift between us!
Please please,
Forget that I caused it!

I'm sorry (so sorry) I'm sorry (so sorry),
I hurt you again,

CHORUS
But please please,
let me call your number
(Please please)
I promise I'll try harder
(Please please)
Let me come over
(Please please)
I promise I'll stand by you
(Please please)
I JUST WANNA BE YOUR FRIEND!
Please! [Fade out]



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