The never ending HORROR story

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How this will help: It can help get creative juices flowing, and maybe even give you ideas for stories or plots!

We're making a horror story one sentence at a time! Be sure to read the whole story before you contribute so you know what's happening, and please allow other people to post before you post again. At least one other person needs to post after you before you can contribute again unless there has been no reply for 5 days.

PLEASE USE CORRECT PUNCTUATION AND CAPITALISATION LIKE IT WAS A REAL STORY! ONE SENTENCE AT A TIME!

Other Stories to participate in:
The never ending story
The never ending EROTIC COMEDY
The never ending LOVE story

 

 

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Jack had always had a thing for large, supposedly haunted houses, and this house was no exception.

 

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It was said to be haunted by an old wench that died in a horrible work-related accident.

 

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Rumour had it that her work was of dubious nature, but everyone had speculated as to what it could have been - from taxidermy and witchery to prostitution and black market body parts.

 

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Jack's intention was to find out what it was that wench actually did for a living.

 

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To achieve such a goal he had assembled a small trio of friends who were willing to accompany him into the house.

 

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Jack, Rodrigo and Bella (originally Benedict, but she was unfortunate enough to be born in the wrong body) stood outside the house, getting ready to go in.

 

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As Bella pulled on her army boots Jack found himself launching into a speech, "Friends, tonight we embark on an adventure like no other!"

 

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Rodrigo couldn't possibly fathom how he got himself dragged into this.

 

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Bella ashed out her fag on Jacks shoulder, muttering "save the speech honey" as she pushed past him and began walking towards the house.

 

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The door wailed in pain as Bella opened it, or maybe it just creaked loudly.

 

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The trio entered the house quietly, listening to the air wailing through the holes and gaps in the house.

 

Xian

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Bella led the way, her flashlight momentarily banishing the darkness within a little at a time.

 

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Behind her two boys let out girlish screams as the door slammed closed, and Bella found herself smiling...it was going to be an interesting night.

 

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The flash chose that moment to flicker out and the darkness pressed insistently upon the now silent trio.

 

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Bella frowned, and thumped one end of the flashlight to her open palm, while Rodrigo and Jack huddled closer to her.

 

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The flashlight then flickered back on. Bella, Rodrigo, and Jack then continued their journey accross the house.

 

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"What are we even doing here," Rodrigo whimpered, for the hundredth time that night.

 

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We are going to embark on a mysterious and horrifying journey, one from witch others never return, hah hahah ahahahahh (in a wild and cackling manner)

 

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Bella smiled at Rodrigo as she said that, "I have bigger balls than you, boy".

 

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Bella replied, Ahh but lets not be confused why we are here, we should embark on the dark journey to find what is behind the corridor.

 

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Rodrigo really didn't want to, but didn't dare to protest.

 

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Bella was quite convincing and merciless with her actions, that both Rodrigo and Jack quivered in their boots at the consequences of not following bella

 

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The insides of the house were as they expected; dusty, full of cobwebs, barely furnished, drafty, dark, and of course, creepy.

 

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They knew there was nothing to be afraid of, but they still couldn't help the feeling that there was something watching them.

 

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Bella took off suddenly, walking quickly to examine the rooms.

 

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She peered into each one quickly before moving onto the next, checking to ensure the house was truly vacant.

 

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The boys hurried to be beside her, scared to be left behind.

 

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When she finally stopped, the boys ran into her, and she turned to yell "watch it!".

 

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Rodrigo mumbled an apology as Jack attempted to take back his pet project, "Let's search each room one at a time and see if we can find anything...but stick together, if one of us gets-"

"scared?" interrupted Bella.

 

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"I'm not scared!" Spat Jack, furious and embarrassed.

 

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Jade Elizabeth (Bunny) is a Poet who has made 6253 posts since joining Creative Burrow on 12:15am Sun, Nov 2, 2008. Bunny was invited by No one (creator of this site).

About Bunny
Jade Elizabeth is an eccentric young woman who enjoys writing stories and poems with hidden deeper meanings. She is quoted saying “Writing to me is not a hobby. It's a passion. It's something that lets my thoughts expose themselves, and my heart shine through where other art could not.”

Commonly her poems are inspired by love or depression, and are dedicated to the people who encouraged the emotion. Given the chance she will readily pull her poems apart, exposing the deeper and hidden meanings behind her words.

Her stories are usually unspoken messages to those close to her – giving every story a hidden meaning. Some things are better left unsaid, or in her case, expressed indirectly through stories.

Jade used to write Documentation for Simple Machines in her free time, but has since begun studying and working, which takes up most of her free time now.

Writing Style
Romance, Fantasy, and Sad Stories and Poems.

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