So this is a track I recently created and I was hoping for some feedback. This is just a short demo before I commit to a full length track with a certain sound. My personal least favorite part is around the 1:08 mark where the drum beat changes. Thanks for listening!

 

I like what you have so far. The drums at 1:08 do feel a bit off at first. I don't know, maybe try a different beat or something? That's of course, up to you. But overall, it's pretty good.

I love each side of that 1:08 mark but it almost feels like you're trying to merge two separate tracks or ideas? It sounds like it could be music for a mobile game too, you might like to look into selling some music to game devs ha ha .

I like it! I agree with Bunny though, it kind of sounds like two separate tracks being merged into one.

The sound of the beat for the first 50 seconds is a little too long and you should maybe cut it to 20 seconds and then change the beat or make the intro a little more dramatic. I like the sound of it and can see where it is going, which will be awesome!