Aiko

Growing Baby Bunny

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I look across the empty space,
I see you standing, cold as a stone,
not even a small chance for a short embrace,
why, your distance chills me to the bone.
You do not notice, you do not turn,
I watch your every move, & begin to shake,
I worry that if your eyes were to look, my cheeks would burn,
you turn away, & I am shunned, my mask falters, my heart begins to break.

 

Bunny

Marketing Team

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Wow, powerful :D. Great work Aiko :D!

 

Kimberley

Furry Young Bunny

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Awww :sniffles: so sweet :)

 

Lunar

Furrless Old Bunny

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good poem :)
that line is really strong!
i love it
xx

 

Tank

Growing Baby Bunny

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brrrr [,[,[,[,[,[,[,[,[,[,Tank Rumbles In

that's so sad, and provoking,well done

Tank  8)

 

Nutti

Growing Baby Bunny

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wow, this short poem is impacting!
For me, this brings the emotions of yearning for lost love, or even for forbidden love, and aptly describes one's soul as we go through the process.

 



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Nameless (Aiko) is a Poet who has made 50 posts since joining Creative Burrow on 04:47pm Mon, Jan 19, 2009. Aiko was invited by No One.

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phylosophical, romance.

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