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Aiko
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11:05am Sun, Mar 22, 2009
I look across the empty space,
I see you standing, cold as a stone,
not even a small chance for a short embrace,
why, your distance chills me to the bone.
You do not notice, you do not turn,
I watch your every move, & begin to shake,
I worry that if your eyes were to look, my cheeks would burn,
you turn away, & I am shunned, my mask falters, my heart begins to break.
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#1: 03:03am Wed, Apr 8, 2009
Wow, powerful
. Great work Aiko
!
Kimberley
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#2: 12:49pm Thu, Apr 9, 2009
Awww
so sweet
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#3: 06:41am Fri, Apr 24, 2009
good poem
that line is really strong!
i love it
xx
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#4: 04:26am Sun, Jun 21, 2009
brrrr [,[,[,[,[,[,[,[,[,[,Tank Rumbles In
that's so sad, and provoking,well done
Tank
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#5: 04:39am Sun, Jun 21, 2009
wow, this short poem is impacting!
For me, this brings the emotions of yearning for lost love, or even for forbidden love, and aptly describes one's soul as we go through the process.
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Nameless (Aiko) is a Poet who has made 50 posts since joining Creative Burrow on 04:47pm Mon, Jan 19, 2009. Aiko was invited by No One.
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phylosophical, romance.
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