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CreativeWritingBurrow => Poetry => Topic started by: Runic on 07:09am Thu, Oct 25, 2012

Title: Piano Keys by Runic
Post by: Runic on 07:09am Thu, Oct 25, 2012

Piano Keys
by Bryan Runic Deakin

The blood drips,
From the piano keys.
His hand holds the thorns,
From the rose she once owned.

His grip tightens,
More blood falls,
He does not flinch,
No emotions at all.

The blood now hits the floor,
A pool has formed,
Around his souls,
No movement at all.

Lost all emotions,
The will to move,
No more sorrow,
No life at all.

A lantern moves in the distance,
As lightning strikes outside,
Something is stirring,
Maybe a raven in the hall.

Hark

Some time passes,
He looks around,
Wipes a tear from his eye,
In death he falls.

© 2012, Bryan Runic Deakin

Title: Re: Piano Keys by Runic
Post by: Bunny on 08:05pm Thu, Oct 25, 2012

Awww :(

Title: Re: Piano Keys by Runic
Post by: Runic on 08:37pm Thu, Oct 25, 2012

you like?

Title: Re: Piano Keys by Runic
Post by: Bunny on 03:03am Fri, Nov 9, 2012

I do, I really like it, it's just that it's kinda sad! :D

Title: Re: Piano Keys by Runic
Post by: Kimberley on 06:47am Sat, Nov 10, 2012

Wow this one is great!