cbprincess2

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                                                         Wilted Flower

Bent,slumped,reaching close to the soil. Petal after petal falling ever so slowly,with each one having a saying." Will you love me? "
Am I not good enough?
Have I been foolish this whole time?
Will you or anyone see me,for me?
Am I forever ruined?
The roots are loosening up bit by bit
I'm starving from malnourishment
I'm dehydrated
No one visits
I'm no longer admired for my beauty
I've become a shadow of my former self
I don't know who I am
What am I now?
Petal drops
I'm wilting away
I try to feed & hydrate myself but it is all in vain
There's a cloud hovering above me,mocking me
No rainfalls,just a thick black cloud
I'm stuck in the hardened mud
If I  try to reach out,I'm met with nothing to hold on to.
More petals fall, I feel naked & ashamed
I'm afraid of my own reflection
I'm agonizing over this slow & painful death
There's one petal left now
What to do? Hold on to it or let  it be?
Wilted no longer
I'm on the soil face down,barely can  breathe in.

 

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Wow brilliant and powerful piece! Very sad subject matter but brilliantly done. Love it!

 



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cbprincess (cbprincess2) is a Regular who has made 16 posts since joining Creative Burrow on 12:38am Sun, Sep 28, 2014. cbprincess2 was invited by no one.

About cbprincess2
I'm an emotional mess, very sensitive by default. I am intuitive to
the energy of others. It can be a gift and a curse at the same time. I'm a loner,sometimes by choice. I have very  few close & loyal friends. I just recently started writing again,after almost 10 years of  suffering and silence. I suffer from anxiety and depression. Its taken over my life & so I'm using poetry as an outlet to heal and release this never ending cycle of mental & emotional pain.

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Romance,self-help,relationships.

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