I'm just going to post the opening scene and see what you guys think. I'm not going to spoil any surprises, so I think I'll post every scene after I write it and kind of let you go through the whole thing!
The Series is the movie title, and the Subject will have the scene number and scene title.
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INT. GREY RESIDENCE FOYER
A man, RUSSEL GREY, rushes down the stairs with a suitcase, his phone held between his ear and shoulder.
RUSSEL
Yes, her water just broke, we're coming in now.
His wife waits for him in the car.
He walks O.S. into the kitchen to grab a suitcase and rushes out the door.
EXT. DRIVEWAY - MORNING
The trunk of a black SUV is open. SHEILA is heard moaning in the front seat, and RUSSEL throws the packed suitcase into the back shuts it hard, and runs around to get in the car.
RUSSEL
(muffled)
Okay, we're going, we're going!
CLOSE UP: THE DRIVER'S SIDE WINDOW
As the car drives O.S., the red flag on the mailbox slowly bends in half.
INT. HOSPITAL HALLWAY
Two female NURSES and one male DOCTOR rush a screaming SHEILA on a gurney. RUSSEL is keeping up beside her, holding her hand.
They wheel her into the delivery room as she screams in pain.
INT. DELIVERY ROOM
The doctor and his nurses are rambling in medical slang about her vitals and heartbeat.
DOCTOR
Okay, Sheila, I need you to push for me, okay? Come on, push!
SHEILA
AAAAARRRRRGGGHHH!!!
RUSSEL
Come on, baby!
She pushes and pushes, panting and sweating.
Unbeknownst to the medical crew, the metal instruments on some of the surrounding tables begin to vibrate.
DOCTOR
Come on, Sheila, you can do it, push. Push! I see the head! Almost there!
The metal instruments vibrate more violently as the baby is pushed out. The second the feet are extracted, the instruments bend in half. The baby is completely pulled out, crying intensely.
NURSE #1
It's a boy!
NURSE #1 turns to get a pair of scissors to cut the umbilical cord, and sees the warped instruments.
NURSE #1
What the...
A gasp is heard O.S., and she looks up to see the DOCTOR.
He is standing extremely still, eyes wide, holding his heart. NURSE #2, RUSSEL, and SHEILA notice, in pure shock at what's happening.
A flourish of silver dust-like particles are mysteriously pulled from the DOCTOR'S chest, forming blood spots at the exit points.
The silver dust swirls into a small, shiny, solid metal ball, falls to the floor and rolls away. The DOCTOR then also falls over, dead.
ZOOM IN: SHEILA HOLDING HER BABY
The baby is smiling, looking at his mother, no longer crying.
The screen cuts to black, and the title is shown:
METALBENDER
Novelist Bunnies: Do you write in order? 
