At the train station, trying hard not to cry

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Bunny

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06:45am Sat, Sep 8, 2012
I am sitting at the train station, it's 8:45pm. Waiting to go home. I have always known the end of my story because it has a prophecy that clearly states the quartet becomes a trio...and I knew which one was to die since I began the story, but I wasnt sure how exactly and figured I would get to that. I always assumed he would be injured or he would ''expire/run out of life'' (wont elaborate it's a spoiler on who).

But tonight I am being whispered to and the death of one of the heroes is so fucking tragic I am fighting back tears and everyone is staring at me. I couldnt have come up with a better, more heroic or memorable death...I just hope I can write it well enough to make you all cry so I can snigger in my evil revenge ;).

So yeah, someone distract me because everyone is staring and my lip is wobbling and I keep having to pretend my hair is stabbing my eyeballs and growling/sighing about it :S.

 

QuirkyJessi

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Awww.... I'm sorry!  *hugs*

I'm glad that you came up with something so tragic that it actually brought you to tears. Isn't it amazing how close we can get to our own characters some times? It's obviously your duty to do whatever you can to give the character justice, though, so I wish you the best luck in finding the right words to do so.

 

SifuPhil

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You're going to push this character in front of the train, aren't you? AREN'T you?!?

You sick, sick person! I think I love you!

 

Bunny

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QuirkyJessi (07:02pm Sat, Sep  8, 2012)
Awww.... I'm sorry!  *hugs*

I'm glad that you came up with something so tragic that it actually brought you to tears. Isn't it amazing how close we can get to our own characters some times? It's obviously your duty to do whatever you can to give the character justice, though, so I wish you the best luck in finding the right words to do so.

I think it was more the gesture than "it's my friend dying". I immediately went to "how would I feel" and yeah I felt horrible ha ha.

SifuPhil (07:34pm Sat, Sep  8, 2012)
You're going to push this character in front of the train, aren't you? AREN'T you?!?

You sick, sick person! I think I love you!

Ha ha they will be tested many times >:D.

 

Kenny

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Was there anything that triggered ideas? I'm curious how tragic it will be. I think you had a nice feeling when you finally had an idea and saw it all coming together :)

 

Bunny

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Nope! It just happened. Essentially one character sacrefices themselves to save the other character. The way it's done, out of love, just eats me up ha ha.

I have had my main character on my back for a while to get started again, but I havent....maybe he was trying to push me or something ha ha.

 

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Jade Elizabeth (Bunny) is a Poet who has made 6253 posts since joining Creative Burrow on 12:15am Sun, Nov 2, 2008. Bunny was invited by No one (creator of this site).

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Jade Elizabeth is an eccentric young woman who enjoys writing stories and poems with hidden deeper meanings. She is quoted saying “Writing to me is not a hobby. It's a passion. It's something that lets my thoughts expose themselves, and my heart shine through where other art could not.”

Commonly her poems are inspired by love or depression, and are dedicated to the people who encouraged the emotion. Given the chance she will readily pull her poems apart, exposing the deeper and hidden meanings behind her words.

Her stories are usually unspoken messages to those close to her – giving every story a hidden meaning. Some things are better left unsaid, or in her case, expressed indirectly through stories.

Jade used to write Documentation for Simple Machines in her free time, but has since begun studying and working, which takes up most of her free time now.

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